by Tatiana Costa Lopes
New York is the fashion capital of the United States. Tatiana met up with McKenzie and Bryson, two young people from Louisville, Kentucky trying to make it in the Big Apple. They shared their hopes, goals and less exciting realities of moving from a small town to New York City to pursue a fashion career.
Your video is well organized in terms of content. You are a good storyteller. I like your voice over. Technically, you have to make sure that you do not place your interviewee against a white wall. Choose a shot with more space. Also make sure that your B-roll is not 1 shot, but two or more. And your video will be even more interesting if you let your interviewees do something and let them tell at the same time. Job well done!